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Grandma’s Lovely Photo

This is my grandma.
When she bakes I only see her back with the two strings of the apron hanging down. My little brother Kit likes to touch and pull the strings. My grandma is never ever gets upset at him. Instead, she comes and gives us toasts. They are nice and warm. Our grandma’s toasts are always the best! That is because she puts a lot of salt. My mom says it’s bad for your body. But I don’t listen to her. I think it’s because she is afraid there won’t be any left for her.
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Комментарий члена жюри: Марина Темкина
06/08/2019
Good work, Кира! The sentence "My grandma is never ever gets upset at him" - has one redundant verb. The typos on "brother", you have "broth". Thank you.
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